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typical spirit garden masterpiece
only reason for not full 5 star is it does get a little bit samey with the drums and rhythm, a bit more variation to spice up the second half would do very well.
although..
..is continue a reference to how I want the song to continue?

Solid atmosphere and track, really enjoy the melodies. The intro is good, establishes a pattern for the whole track while still being varied enough to be interesting. However, the drums feel very strange and out of place. The the way they are mixed feel weird and are definitely way too loud and present. I think it could be fixed by removing the distortion and turning the volume of them down a bit; idea being to get them less present in the mix, since I think that would fit the vibe of the track better. As for the programming of them, I don't think how they're done really fit the song. I would suggest you to reference other tracks of similar style to see how they do drums, my idea would be to do a simplified beat similar to what a real drummer would do. (if you want I could provide an example on discord)
Not that complex drums are bad, but the particular patterns used in this track don't seem to fit it.
The bass guitar seems to have some really complex lines. It likely would sound better being simplified, especially in the beginning section. It works in the drum section, but doesn't really fit in the beginning, since it doesn't really build up to anything.

The instrumentation, guitar work, synth work, and all that is really well done; but the drums kill it for me..
There's so much melodic and rhythmic stuff going on with the synths and guitars, so there isn't much room to focus on complicated rhythms. It doesn't feel like there's any rhythm from the drums to catch on to, and for a track like this that's important. To put it another way, the melodies and chords are complex, so the drums should be simple; otherwise it becomes too complicated and too much for the listener to pay attention to, which I think is the problem with this track. 1:37-1:49 and the final section at 3:16 work well because they are simple to understand, compliment the music, and are predictable, where a lot of the rest of the track's drums feel unpredictable or even random.
If drums were fixed, easily 5 stars

VeryInactive01 responds:

the track's pretty old, I was hella worse in music prouction stuff when I made it lol
thanks for the honest opinion though, I am too aware of how ba the perc was, I'd definitely work on it more than I di back then

hi! I am a christian music producer who primarily makes subgenres of dnb. always trying to improve, so constructive criticism is appreciated!

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