The instrumentation, guitar work, synth work, and all that is really well done; but the drums kill it for me..
There's so much melodic and rhythmic stuff going on with the synths and guitars, so there isn't much room to focus on complicated rhythms. It doesn't feel like there's any rhythm from the drums to catch on to, and for a track like this that's important. To put it another way, the melodies and chords are complex, so the drums should be simple; otherwise it becomes too complicated and too much for the listener to pay attention to, which I think is the problem with this track. 1:37-1:49 and the final section at 3:16 work well because they are simple to understand, compliment the music, and are predictable, where a lot of the rest of the track's drums feel unpredictable or even random.
If drums were fixed, easily 5 stars